Please read if you are wondering about how my Nero reader-insert is progressing!
Okay, about my "Armed By Hell : Nero x Demonic!Reader"
story (Formerly known as Nero x HalfDemon!Reader), I have re-read everything I have written and thought, 'Hey... Some of this doesn't sound good...
' And by that, I mean in terms of the flow of the story. The plot will remain the same of course, it's just about how it is presented. So I've edited a butt load of crap on the first and second chapter and It sounds SO much better now... (thank God)
I've also had problems with the OC introduced in the second chapter, Devyn
(formerly known as Damon
). One of the problems is that he bore too much of a resemblance to Delsin Rowe
from ISS... And that bothered me because he isn't supposed to make an appearance in this story (GOD DAMN IT, DELSIN!)
But no, yeah, I probably should've made him less generic looking anyway. So, right now, I am in the middle of recreating the OC, starting with the name (It's Devyn
now... Remember it.... DEVYN
). However, some things regarding the character will remain the same (his preference for black clothing and hair colour). If you're wondering why I named him that, you can search out the meaning. It'll sort of give you a hint of what kind of person he is. But... expect PLOT TWISTS
'cause what's a story without one?
I recommend re-reading the story again because it probably sounds better now (for me, at least). Also, if you want immediate and higher chances of getting updates for this story. I recommend visiting Wattpad
because it's SO much more easier to upload chapters there than on DA. But fear not loyal DA users! I will still upload it here, it'll just take slightly longer.
I'm obviously trying to make this story well written as much as I can for you guys . I don't want anything to be half-assed... (...but full-assed ) It's all for you beautiful people!
Oh yeah... The official name of this story is "Armed By Hell" now. So search than on Wattpad. My account name is still the same there as on DA. I also made a cover art for it for Wattpad but I decided to upload it here too just for the heck of it.
Thank you all for your support! I hope this story turns out well